STYLE SHEET FOR SUBMISSION OF ARTICLES, CHAPTERS, BOOKS SUBMISSION OF BOOKS CHAPTERS/ARTICLES

Midnight Marquee has launched the writing of many of today's most well-known genre writers. We are always looking for new talent, but if you think you'll get rich writing, think again, you have to write because you love to write, not for money.

We can accept any format CD or DVD for the Macintosh (preferred) or PC. We ask that contributors send us a hard copy as well as a computer disk (clearly labeled). Authors frequently send us updates of books before layout begins. This is fine. We only ask that each disk/attachment is clearly labeled and dated (so we accidentally do not use an older version of the manuscript).

SENDING CHAPTERS AS ATTACHED E-MAIL FILES We us MacLinksPlus, a software program that allows us to decode and translate all manuscripts sent us as attached files via e-mail or on disk. Most of these transmissions are successful. We do ask that you also submit a hard copy via regular mail and followup a few day's after submission to see if the transmission was successful. Never send chapters or articles as a regular e-mail (using cut and paste), as all formatting (italics, bold) is lost. Always send copy as an e-mail attachment in the original software program in which it was created (Microsoft Word, Word Perfect, etc.).

GENERAL INFORMATION FOR SUBMITTING MANUSCRIPTS

1. When using dashes in your text, do not type "--" or " - "; instead, use an Em Dash. Your word processing program should show you how to create them. Thus, this is the proper format: "Bela Lugosi—on the comeback in Son of Frankenstein—reminded his fans of the great talent he was." Do not place a space before or after the Em Dash.

2. When using an ellipsis in your text, do not put any space between the three periods. Do not use a space between the ellipsis and the last or first letter when the ellipsis comes at the end or beginning of a sentence. Thus, this is wrong: "when Jack and Fred . . ." This is also wrong: "when Jack and Fred ... come alive in the last reel." This is correct: "when Jack and Fred...come alive." Notice, no space between "Fred" and the dots, or no space after the dots before the word "come."

3. Cast and Credits lists should always appear at the end of the chapter or article, never at the beginning. The format to be used is below (notice the lack of indentation, placing the word Credits and Cast in all caps, using colons and parentheses, having the star's real name come before the character name).

CREDITS: Producer: Michael Balcon; Director: Robert Stevenson; Screenplay: L. Du Garde Peach and Sidney Gilliat; Cinematographer: Jack Cox; Editors: R.E. Dearing (notice there is no space between 2 initials)

CAST: Boris Karloff (Dr. Laurience); Anna Lee (Dr. Clare Wyatt); John Loder (Dick);

4. Never set your margins wider than 6 1/2 inches. 5. Set your paragraph indents at one-quarter inch (use a tab stop; do not space manually by hitting the space bar).

5. Send us type that is single-spaced (if you send it double we have to reformat your text and this adds time).

6. Do not print out page numbers or any type of header or footer on your copy.

7. Do not use any special formatting gimmicks that your word processor uses such as forcing text to fit on one page or a specific "leading" measurement that sets the spacing between lines. The more fancy formatting you use, the more complex it is for us to de-format your text. Often we can't!

8. Always use Times or Times Roman as your submission font.

9. Remember to place titles of movies, plays, TV shows, novels, etc. in italics using upper and lower case letters (never all capitals). Do not place the above in bold!

10. Place song titles, individual episodes of a TV show, etc. in quotes.

11. Do not overdo synopses. We are looking for personal analysis (tracing themes, directorial style, sequences that work/don't work), production details, etc. Readers want to hear your opinions! However, reminding your reader of the overall plot or specific sequences is often helpful. Balance is the key.

12. Do not spend too much time quoting what other critics/genre writers have said about your movie. A little of this goes a long way. When quoting it is better to use major sources (Variety, New York Times, etc.). Keep this to a minimum.

13. Bob, Fred and Ted: we now drop that final comma before "and" in a list of three.

14. We follow the style rule that capitalizes the first letter after a colon, if what follows can stand alone as a complete sentence. Example—According to Gary Svehla: Horror films are adult fairy tales (not: horror movies are adult fairy tales).

15. When sending back proofread copy, please mark the copy in red or black pen and make any changes big, bold, and noticeable. Always draw a line to the right or left hand border (or put an "X" in the border) to alert us that a change has been made within the body of the text copy. Never ever use Wite-Out to make proof changes!

16. Too many writers like to use little slang terms that they put into quotes. Please, don't! Don't do this: Dick Tracy "flattens" the "flunky" with a good "right" to the "noodle." Instead: Dick Tracy flattens the flunky with a good right to the noodle.

17. Create a sense of "writer's voice" that reflects your personality in whatever you write. Avoid a dry, academic tone. Avoid using words found in the Thesaurus: Do not write down to the reader, but communicate clearly and succinctly.

18. Always try to reinvent yourself by changing your writing style and approaching chapters with new eyes and insight.

19. Avoid footnotes like the plague. If they are necessary, put them at the end of the chapter (not at the bottom of every page) and keep them to a minimum. Academic writing is often boring writing.

20. When including long quoted passages (4 or more sentences), skip a line and indent (1/2 inch, both right and left margins) to separate these longer quoted sections from the rest of the text. Skip a line before continuing with regular text. Do not put these indented quote sections in quotes. And always identify your sources.

21. Numbers one-nine spell out; 10, 11, 12, etc. 22 us number keys.

22. Many writers send us text where tab stops are embedded into the text every half inch or so. This makes things difficult for us to reformat your text. Thus, I'd like to see a tab stop for paragraphs and perhaps two for indented quotes (#20 above), but that is all the tab stops I need see. Remember the more formatting in your text, the more difficult it is for me to reformat your text to meet the needs of our layout.

23. Article length: Articles for Midnight Marquee should be submitted single-spaced and should be typed in 12 point. The length of the article should be 7-10 pages in length. If your article has needs that go beyond this length, approval with the editor on a case by case basis is required.

24. If you are submitting a manuscript to be published as a book, the length should be 200-225 single-spaced text, set in 12 point text. Longer manuscripts can be accepted on a case by case basis, but any text longer than 250 pages in manuscript format can be problematic

. 25. It is always helpful if the writer can provide photos, pressbooks, etc. to help illustrate the article, chapter or book. We have passed on publishing some well written manuscripts simply because we were not able to acquire enough graphics to illustrate the manuscript.

26. Because of corruption of files resulting in Midnight Marquee having to lay out manuscripts twice, we no longer accept scanned photos from outside sources. The author either allows us to borrow to scan and to return the original photos or ads, or, the author, at his or her own expense, pays for color copies to be sent us. We are very responsible with loaned materials, and our printer requires materials to be scanned in a very specific manner that makes the graphics look best when published, and we need to scan all materials in this specific manner. No exceptions!

27. When sending us a manuscript, it is always helpful that the author caption all photos, ads, graphics submitted and clearly label all graphics so no confusion exists where the caption goes.

28. Once a manuscript is submitted in final draft format, we may not be able to alter text or layout if, miraculously, some interview or graphic material becomes available at the last moment. Final submission means final submission. So please be sure what you send is actually a final submission.

 

SOME ADDITIONAL POINTERS FROM OUR COPY EDITOR, LINDA J. WALTER

29. Get a recent dictionary such as Webster's Tenth College Edition, and a good style book (such as The Chicago Manual of Style) or The Elements of Style. Look things up that you've always been a bit unsure of! You want to be as professional as possible right off the bat.
30. Be sure to read your article for sense when it's done. Have a literate friend read it, and see if s/he understands everything. Some authors use extremely obscure words and that slows the usual reader down. It's okay to be creative and use uncommon words sometimes, but some writers sprinkle lots of foreign terms and extremely arcane words or phrases in there, and meaning can be lost. Remember to think of your audience!
31. Do not use very many exclamation points!!!!!! Seriously, most nonfiction writing uses them sparingly, but some authors greatly overuse them; I've often changed them where not needed. Exclamations are used for points that are very important to make, or a thought that evokes amusement or wonderment.
32. Be sure each sentence is a complete thought. This sounds so obvious, but sometimes there are lapses (could be computer-driven deletes that are mistakes, or just lost thoughts).
33. Do not overuse commas. Some writers use commas approximately every 3-6 words, and thus have lengthy, never-ending, run-on sentences, like this one, that really, really, makes a sentence, such as this one, quite choppy. Break it up. Throw some short ones in there. Make it more snappy and less long-winded. A writer should attempt to create rhythm by varying longer sentences with medium-range sentences with short sentences. Mix it up!
34. Use your machine's spell check before you submit the work. Any words that spell check doesn't know and you don't know either, look up.
35. After you're finished and let it sit for at least a few hours or overnight, reread for consistency. Say you're writing about "Some Like It Hot." Then half the time, a writer will write "Some like it Hot" or other variations on capitalization. Pick one (hopefully the title written as you'd see it most often in other reputable publication) and stay with it! Same with titles of things like newspapers: The New York Times or The New York Times. Time magazine. Things like that. Check online style guides or written ones. Same with names... sometimes writers use "van Sloan" and later "Van Sloan," but in the middle of a sentence, not just at the beginning. The more consistent, the easier to edit, proof and get it printed as you envision the piece (as long as it's well-written and conforms to MidMar style).
36. Learn when to use hyphens, en dashes, and em dashes. There are specific times for each; find out how to make them on your computer, as discussed by Gary and Sue earlier. Hyphenate compound-word adjectives ("It's a well-written book,") but not when they're used in the reverse form ("The book was well written.") I know it's confusing, but this is our general style system in the United States.
37. Be consistent in style for abbreviations and items with numerals, and whatever else could be written more than one way. For instance, it's common to use periods in such terms as U.S. (and not US, for our country), L.A. (for Los Angeles), U.K., U.S.S.R., and Roman numerals for World War I or II or WWII. Also, it's usual to write out United States when referring to it as a noun, but you can use U.S. as an adjective, as in "The U.S. flag was flying." Here is a list of words commonly used in articles, chapters and books submitted to us. Here is what we consider to be the consistent spelling: makeup (no hyphen), backstage, onscreen, onstage, backlot, screenwriter, sci-fi, coauthor, costar, filmmaker, filmmaking.
38. For adverbs ending in "ly," do not put a hyphen before them. Wrong: "It is a beautifully-written script." Right: "It is a beautifully written script." Many people still get this wrong even in published writing, but it's a hard and fast copyediting rule.
39. American style puts periods and commas inside quotation marks, even if not a whole sentence or at the end of a sentence. "She went to the movies," he said. Not: "She went to the movies", he said. The British do it the other way (and sometimes use only single quotes, but we aren't Brits, and our British writers should Americanize their writing for U.S. audiences, as much as possible!).
40. When referring to people even by their function, use "who" or "whom," not "that." For example, it's "The actor who played the role," not "The actor that played the role." 41. Do not use "I wanted to try and fix it." The correct usage is "I wanted to try to fix it." The form "try and" is just wrong.
42. Know the difference between "it's" (a contraction of "it is,") and "its" (a possessive pronoun, just like his and hers). Too many people write "it's" all the time, for both. "The dog chased it's tail" is incorrect; use its.
43. Also, most plurals do not have apostrophes, they just have an "s" (or an "es"; if unsure, check dictionary). This is rampant everywhere in society. It's not "Eat's and Drink's" but "Eats and Drinks"! You'll see signs that people are selling "plum's" or "television's." Wrong!

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